Mars Global Surveyor (from NASA)

Instructions for the Term Paper
Dave Osleger - Spring, 2008

(original ideas from Dr. Louise Kellogg)

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Assignment: Write a paper proposing to send an unmanned spacecraft on a mission of scientific exploration to one of the planetary bodies of our Solar System.

Introduction: We have two primary sources of knowledge about the solar system: Earth-based observations (mostly information collected through telescopes) and Space exploration missions (where a spacecraft containing scientific instruments is sent to a part of the solar system to collect information which is transmitted back to Earth).

Since space agencies such as the U.S. space agency NASA have limited resources to spend on space exploration, choices must be made between many possible exploration missions. Missions are chosen based on considerations such as the inherent scientific interest of the possible mission (such as the search for evidence for past life on Mars) and to take advantage of unique opportunities (such as the mission to rendezvous with the asteroid Eros on its most recent trip to the inner solar system). Scientists, usually working in teams, propose future missions to NASA. These proposals are ranked and refined before missions are selected and their design begins. Typically the process takes years.

To give you a feel for this process of scientific decision making, I (with considerable help from Dr. Louise Kellogg, who has taught the course previously) have designed the term paper assignment to be a shortened version of this process. You are the scientist who is proposing a mission of scientific exploration.

Term Paper: You have been asked by NASA to prepare a proposal for an unmanned (no astronauts aboard) mission of scientific exploration to one of the planetary bodies of our Solar System. Your job is to:

  1. Select the destination for this mission. Choose a planetary body that you find interesting.
  2. Identify the primary scientific questions that you would like to see answered about this planetary body.
  3. Determine what scientific observations would best enable you to answer those scientific questions.
  4. Write a proposal (approximately 5-6 pages long) for a mission of scientific exploration to this planetary body.
Due Dates:  You will be given ample opportunity to work on your paper through the course, with part of the TAs responsibility being to help you to write with scientific precision.

1 - During the fourth week of discussion - April 21-24 - you will need to have defined your topic enough to hand in a half-page, typed summary of your chosen planetary mission.  It should be 5-8 sentences long and include enough detail to show us that you have done your preliminary research on the topic.  Your TA will keep this as a record.

2 - During the fifth week of discussion - April 28-May 1 - you will hand in a typed list of 3 to 4 references that you have found and will use in your paper.  The TA will keep these to compare with your actual term paper.

3 - The term paper is due on May 5-8, handed in at the beginning of your scheduled discussion time. This effort will be worth 50% of your total term paper grade.

4 - You will hand in a revised version of your term paper on Monday, June 2, at a time and place pre-arranged by your TA.  This version will add the other 50% of your total to the final term paper grade.  Make sure that you attach the TA-edited first version to the back of your 'final' paper.  

Late Penalty: Significant penalties will be assessed for each assignment that is late. This really should not be a factor for most of you since we guide you through the paper-writing procedure through the course, including a thorough editing by the TAs. 

Length of paper: The text of the paper (including the Introduction, Main Sections, and Conclusions) should be about 5-6 pages long (please do not exceed this length). Use 1" margins all around, double space, and keep the font at 12. In addition to the text of your paper, you should include a list of references cited, and at least 3 figures (more on references and figures below). The reference list and figures are not included in the 5-6 pages of your paper.

Grading: The term paper is worth 50% of the discussion grade in GEL 36 (20% of the total class grade). Your paper will be evaluated for:

Grading will be divided equally between content, writing style and presentation.

Philosophy for Grading Term Papers:

A: An A paper is well organized, free of errors in grammar, spelling, and sentence structure. The paper contains a critical analysis of issues and a description of evidence in support of the arguments. Observations and other data are separated from interpretations or evaluations. The paper is a pleasure to read.

B: Well organized, and communicates well, but the analysis may have flaws or may be insufficiently supported by evidence. There may be minor errors in grammar and spelling.

C: Lacks good analysis. It contains a summary of ideas and arguments, rather than a critical evaluation. It may be poorly organized, with observations intermixed with interpretations. It communicates its message, but the message is not clear because of poor organization, repetitive writing, or errors in grammar and spelling.

D: Poorly organized with no analysis and no clear message. It may be a collection of unsupported opinions or a list of disjointed facts. The writing is poor, so that the paper does not communicate well. The paper contains insufficient references or figures.

F: Fails to meet the assigned requirements. It may fail to communicate, or it may stray from the topic. It may be so laden with quotes that it is not clear what is original writing.


Plagiarism:
Plagiarized or purchased papers will receive a failing grade and will be directed to Student Judicial Affairs. There are several ways for us to check for plagiarism or paper-purchasing. First, the Geology Dept. has copies of every paper that has been written for this class over the past 6 years or so (there is a file of them in our department, indexed for easy searches). Second, resources exist on the web that help spot instances of plagiarism - you would be amazed at how huge the database is and how easy it is to spot "sampled" fragments of text. I find it distasteful to even discuss plagiarism, but even the most well-intentioned student does dumb things when under pressure. Give yourself time, do the paper early, and don't get caught short. Most plagiarism is done out of desperation.  If you are pressured by the deadline, take the late penalty and do it right rather than cut-and-paste together a paper from the web.  A visit to Student Judicial Affairs is not a friendly thing and it stays with you whenever anyone looks at your school records.

Regarding the term paper assignment, if you are unclear as to what constitutes plagiarism, please visit the Student Judicial Affairs website and browse. It is very important that you understand this, as these issues arise every year - don't be the one to raise the problem.


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